“Idheva haṁsa nipata, piyaṁ me tava dassanaṁ;
idheva → (pts) piyaṁ → sipiyaṁ (bj) Issarosi anuppatto, yamidhatthi pavedaya”.
yamidhatthi pavedaya → yaṁ idh atthi pavedayāti (pts)

“Savanena ekassa piyā bhavanti, disvā panekassa viyeti chando;
savanena ekassa → savaṇena cekassa (bj) | cekassa → ekassa (bj: syā); nekassa (bj: machasaṁ) viyeti → vineti (sya1ed, sya2ed); viheti (pts-vp-pli1); vigeti (Ma-aka) | viyeti → vineti (sya-all) | panekassa viyeti → pan ekassa viheti (pts) | viyeti → viheti (bj: sī.vivi); vineti (bj: machasaṁ, syā) | viyeti → vineti (cck: syā.); viheti (cck: pī.); vigeti (cck: ka. aṭṭha.) Disvā ca sutvā ca piyā bhavanti, kaccinnu me pīyasi dassanena.
pīyasi → piyyasi (bj, pts-vp-pli1); piyasi (sya1ed, sya2ed) | kaccinnu → kacci nu kho (sya-all) | pīyasi → piyasi (sya-all) | kaccinnu → kacci nu me piyasi (bj: syā) | pīyasi → piyyasi (cck: sī. pī.)

Savanena piyo mesi, bhiyyo cāgamma dassanaṁ;
savanena → samaṇena (bj) Evaṁ piyadassano me, vasa haṁsa mamantike”.
Evaṁ piyadassano me → evaṁ piyadassano samāno (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1) | me → samāno (sya-all) | me → evaṁ piyadassano samāno (cck: sī. syā. pī.) mamantike → mama santike (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1) | mamantike → mama santike (sya-all); mama santiketi (pts) | mamantike → mama santike (cck: sī. syā. pī.)

“Vaseyyāma tavāgāre, niccaṁ sakkatapūjitā; Matto ca ekadā vajje, ‘haṁsarājaṁ pacantu me’”.
vajje → vajjā (bj, pts-vp-pli1); majjaṁ (sya1ed, sya2ed) | vajje → majjaṁ (sya-all) | ca → va (pts) | vajjā → vajje (bj: machasaṁ); vajjaṁ (bj: syā) | vajje → vajjā (cck: sī. pī.)

“Dhiratthu taṁ majjapānaṁ, yaṁ me piyataraṁ tayā;
majjapānaṁ yaṁ me → annapānaṁ yamme (bj) | majjapānaṁ → annapānaṁ (pts) Na cāpi majjaṁ pissāmi, yāva me vacchasī ghare”.
pissāmi → pāyāmi (bj, pts-vp-pli1); pivissāmi (sya1ed, sya2ed) | pissāmi → pivissāmi (sya-all) | pissāmi → pivissāmi (cck: syā.); pāyāmi (cck: sī. pī.) ghare → ghareti (pts)

“Suvijānaṁ siṅgālānaṁ, sakuṇānañca vassitaṁ;
siṅgālānaṁ sakuṇānañca → sigālānaṁ sakuntānañca (bj) | siṅgālānaṁ → sigālānaṁ (sya-all) sakuṇānañca → sakuntānañca (bj, pts-vp-pli1) | sakuṇānañca → sakuntānañca (cck: sī. syā. pī.) Manussavassitaṁ rāja, dubbijānataraṁ tato.

Api ce maññatī poso, ñāti mitto sakhāti vā;
maññatī → maññati (bj) Yo pubbe sumano hutvā, pacchā sampajjate diso.
yo → so (bj: machasaṁ)

Yasmiṁ mano nivisati, avidūre sahāpi so;
so → yo (bj: sī.vivi) Santikepi hi so dūre, yasmiṁ nāvisate mano.
yasmiṁ nāvisate → yasmā vivasate (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1) | yasmiṁ nāvisate → yasmā vivasate (sya-all) | nāvisate → yasmā vivasate (cck: sī. syā. pī.)

Antopi so hoti pasannacitto, pāraṁ samuddassa pasannacitto;
so → ce (sya-all) | antopi so → anto pi yo (pts) | so → ce (bj: syā) Antopi so hoti paduṭṭhacitto, pāraṁ samuddassa paduṭṭhacitto.
so → yo (bj) | antopi so → anto pi yo (pts)

Saṁvasantā vivasanti, ye disā te rathesabha;
saṁvasantā → saṁvasantāpi (bj); saṁvasanto (pts) disā → tādisā (bj: machasaṁ) Ārā santo saṁvasanti, manasā raṭṭhavaḍḍhana.
saṁvasanti → ārādhitā saṁvasanti (bj: machasaṁ)

Aticiraṁ nivāsena, piyo bhavati appiyo; Āmanta kho taṁ gacchāma, purā te homa appiyā”.
gacchāma → gacchāmi (sya1ed, sya2ed) | gacchāma → gacchāmi (sya-all) | gacchāma → gaccāmi (bj: syā) | gacchāma → gacchāmi (cck: syā.) homa appiyā → homi appiyo (sya1ed, sya2ed) | homa appiyā evañce → homi appiyo evaṁ ce (sya-all) | purā → pura (pts) | appiyā evañce → appiyāti evaṁ ce (pts) | homa → hotha (bj: machasaṁ, syā) | appiyā → appiyo (bj: syā) | appiyā → homi appiyo (cck: syā.)

“Evañce yācamānānaṁ, añjaliṁ nāvabujjhasi;
nāvabujjhasi paricārakānaṁ sataṁ → nāvakhujjhasi parivārakānaṁ sattānaṁ (bj) Paricārakānaṁ sataṁ, vacanaṁ na karosi no;
sataṁ → santānaṁ (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed); sattānaṁ (pts-vp-pli1) | sataṁ → santānaṁ (sya-all) | sataṁ → santānaṁ (cck: sī. syā.); sattānaṁ (cck: pī.) Evaṁ taṁ abhiyācāma, puna kayirāsi pariyāyaṁ”.
pariyāyaṁ evañce → pariyāyanti evaṁ ce (pts)

“Evañce no viharataṁ, antarāyo na hessati; Tuyhañcāpi mahārāja, mayhañca raṭṭhavaḍḍhana;
Tuyhañcāpi → vāpi (sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1, mr) | tuyhañcāpi → tuyhaṁ vāpi (sya-all, pts) | Tuyhañcāpi → vāpi (cck: syā. pī. ka.) mayhañca → vā (bahūsu) | mayhañca → mayhaṁ vā (bj, sya-all) | mayhañca raṭṭhavaḍḍhana → mayhaṁ vā raṭṭhavaddhana (pts) | raṭṭhavaḍḍhana → raṭṭhavaddana (bj note) | mayhañca → vā (cck: bahūsu) Appeva nāma passemu, ahorattānamaccaye”ti.
passemu → passema (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1) | appeva nāma passemu → appevanāma passema (bj, sya-all) | passema → pamusse (bj: machasaṁ) | passemu → passema (cck: sī. syā. pī.)

Javanahaṁsajātakaṁ tatiyaṁ.
tatiyaṁ → (bj)