“Idheva haṁsa nipata, piyaṁ me tava dassanaṁ; Issarosi anuppatto, yamidhatthi pavedaya”.

“Savanena ekassa piyā bhavanti, disvā panekassa viyeti chando;
viyeti → vineti (sya1ed, sya2ed); viheti (pts-vp-pli1); vigeti (Ma-aka) Disvā ca sutvā ca piyā bhavanti, kaccinnu me pīyasi dassanena.
pīyasi → piyyasi (bj, pts-vp-pli1); piyasi (sya1ed, sya2ed)

Savanena piyo mesi, bhiyyo cāgamma dassanaṁ; Evaṁ piyadassano me, vasa haṁsa mamantike”.
Evaṁ piyadassano me → evaṁ piyadassano samāno (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1) mamantike → mama santike (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1)

“Vaseyyāma tavāgāre, niccaṁ sakkatapūjitā; Matto ca ekadā vajje, ‘haṁsarājaṁ pacantu me’”.
vajje → vajjā (bj, pts-vp-pli1); majjaṁ (sya1ed, sya2ed)

“Dhiratthu taṁ majjapānaṁ, yaṁ me piyataraṁ tayā; Na cāpi majjaṁ pissāmi, yāva me vacchasī ghare”.
pissāmi → pāyāmi (bj, pts-vp-pli1); pivissāmi (sya1ed, sya2ed)

“Suvijānaṁ siṅgālānaṁ, sakuṇānañca vassitaṁ;
sakuṇānañca → sakuntānañca (bj, pts-vp-pli1) Manussavassitaṁ rāja, dubbijānataraṁ tato.

Api ce maññatī poso, ñāti mitto sakhāti vā; Yo pubbe sumano hutvā, pacchā sampajjate diso.

Yasmiṁ mano nivisati, avidūre sahāpi so; Santikepi hi so dūre, yasmiṁ nāvisate mano.
yasmiṁ nāvisate → yasmā vivasate (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1)

Antopi so hoti pasannacitto, pāraṁ samuddassa pasannacitto; Antopi so hoti paduṭṭhacitto, pāraṁ samuddassa paduṭṭhacitto.

Saṁvasantā vivasanti, ye disā te rathesabha; Ārā santo saṁvasanti, manasā raṭṭhavaḍḍhana.

Aticiraṁ nivāsena, piyo bhavati appiyo; Āmanta kho taṁ gacchāma, purā te homa appiyā”.
gacchāma → gacchāmi (sya1ed, sya2ed) homa appiyā → homi appiyo (sya1ed, sya2ed)

“Evañce yācamānānaṁ, añjaliṁ nāvabujjhasi; Paricārakānaṁ sataṁ, vacanaṁ na karosi no;
sataṁ → santānaṁ (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed); sattānaṁ (pts-vp-pli1) Evaṁ taṁ abhiyācāma, puna kayirāsi pariyāyaṁ”.

“Evañce no viharataṁ, antarāyo na hessati; Tuyhañcāpi mahārāja, mayhañca raṭṭhavaḍḍhana;
Tuyhañcāpi → vāpi (sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1, mr) mayhañca → vā (bahūsu) Appeva nāma passemu, ahorattānamaccaye”ti.
passemu → passema (bj, sya1ed, sya2ed, pts-vp-pli1)

Javanahaṁsajātakaṁ tatiyaṁ.